**

Title

:**

Consider

a

more

descriptive

title

like

"

Expl

oring

As

ynchronous

React

with

Next

JS

13

Beta

"

-

**

Introduction

:**

Make

the

introduction

more

engaging

.

Instead

of

saying

,

"

W

anna

see

something

cool

?"

consider

something

like

"

Get

ready

for

a

game

changer

:

React

is

getting

native

async

support

..."

-

**

Structure

:**

Consider

using

more

sub

head

ings

to

break

down

the

information

and

make

it

easier

for

readers

to

follow

.

For

example

,

a

sub

heading

for

'

Async

React

Component

',

'

Server

Components

',

'

Loading

data

'

etc

.

-

**

Technical

terms

:**

There

are

a

lot

of

technical

j

argon

and

terms

used

.

Try

to

explain

them

in

simpler

terms

to

make

the

article

more

accessible

to

readers

who

may

not

be

as

familiar

with

these

concepts

.

-

**

Images

:**

You

have

utilized

a

lot

of

images

and

GIF

s

in

the

article

.

Make

sure

to

add

descriptive

alt

text

to

each

of

these

for

better

accessibility

and

SEO

.

-

**

Code

snippets

:**

Consider

adding

brief

explanations

or

comments

within

the

code

snippets

to

help

readers

understand

what

each

part

of

the

code

is

doing

.

-

**

Conclusion

:**

Instead

of

ending

with

"

Cheers

,

~

Sw

ize

c

",

consider

ending

with

a

summary

of

the

main

points

covered

in

the

article

or

a

call

-to

-action

,

encouraging

readers

to

try

out

async

React

with

Next

JS

13

Beta

.

-

**

PS

note

:**

You

can

move

the

PS

note

about

the

beta

docs

for

Next

JS

13

to

the

main

body

of

the

article

.

It

would

be

more

noticeable

and

useful

there

.

-

**

Overall

tone

:**

The

article

is

written

in

a

convers

ational

tone

,

which

is

great

for

engaging

readers

.

However

,

ensure

that

the

language

is

professional

and

the

explanations

are

clear

and

concise

.